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.: I Tryed :.

You said I took away all your fears
I tryed to catch all your tears
But yet still you always cry
A red tear falls from your eye

The line they draw tares us apart
They say you can't brake a already broken heart
I tryed to save your life
But still you followed me and picked up the knife

I'm sorry I told you all these things
The fallen fairy never sings
Tell me we will be together
Tell me this bond will last forever

Your family forgets your hear
All you wanted was there open ear
They say you are the worthless one
You never had that much fun

I'm sorry for all your pain
Come dance with me in the rain
Darkness and light draws the line
You cut your vains like I've cut mine

Beauty underneath the cuts and bruisses
In this game everyone losses
I tryed to show you the way
In all the lies you forever lay

Dont let the world tell you lies
Just look at your image through my eyes
I tryed to save your life
Still you used that silver knife

You believe all there lies
See past there blind eyes
All the hiden voices trapped in your head
Forget what the things they said
But it's to late your already dead
©2006-2009 ~RavensRevenge666
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This is for new contest (yay it back) Hope you all enjoy :D

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thanks so much for submitting!! Loving the participation, and whoring:) *pats head* gooood member!!

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*smiles* Thanxz and your welcome can I have a treat now? lol

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haha, only if you win:-p

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This is great, lots of emotion :) Good luck with it

Blessed be

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Very nice, one of those situations that doesn't necessarily happen to everyone in that way, but in a vague sorta, "i kinda know what you mean" type way. I hope that makes sense... In short, nice work, I like it. (you may want to type your poetry/prose on a word processor and spell check before submitting it though.. just a thought. That's what I do;))

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Thanxz :D

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Yes i know alot of words are missed spelled but today I was trying to go fast so I could watch T-minus Rock on mtv2 (they had my favorite song on) thanxz for telling me tho and I do know what you mean by the "i kinda know what you mean type way"

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That's good, I have a hard time describing poetry for one reason or another (does reason have anything to do with it?). In case you hadn't noticed;).

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lol you seem fine at it to me :D

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